I love the color palette you chose for the cover illustration. The game felt dream-like, the different options kept me exploring different outcomes. I think having more options towards the end could benefit the narrative to expand and be even more interesting.
the strangeness of the narrative is really engaging -- a bit like a fever-dream? it's so mysterious !! it feels like it's happening somewhere between a super-vivid dream and a semi-conscious reality. is the 'not' at the end a restart-game button, or is it a looping (same storyline/not a reset point) button? (i got the safe end and noticed that the restart button is names as such). even if it's unintentional i think it adds to the mysterious events of the game's narrative.
i think having the text more towards the center of the screen could help visually? if there are going to be full-background images, placing the text more 'in' the game might work? i'm also playing this on a computer, so the screen just feels large compared to the text -- there's a way to reformat for different screens in the stylesheet.
overall, i loved this game !! it's confusing in a way that's very fitting for the narrative :)
The storyline of the game is very intriguing but I kept getting the same ending. Are there multiple endings or is there only one way this game ends? I played multiple times selecting different choices but I landed in the same spot. Nonetheless, great game, kept me engaged
I like how the narrative hints towards dream or reality, the cover image goes well with the game, kinda add an annotation where it hints that you have to click the text in order to start the game
I like the welcoming opening image with the large bold title and illustration. Maybe there can be more options in the passage to choose from or explore in the descriptions/settings you have.
When i get to the point where you realized you dropped your keys and your heart starts to sink, i cant access any other selection box, either something is missing, or the passage is too long for scrolling to be disabled.
But other than that intreging story, can already see some dream/psychedelic imagery.
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I love the color palette you chose for the cover illustration. The game felt dream-like, the different options kept me exploring different outcomes. I think having more options towards the end could benefit the narrative to expand and be even more interesting.
the strangeness of the narrative is really engaging -- a bit like a fever-dream? it's so mysterious !! it feels like it's happening somewhere between a super-vivid dream and a semi-conscious reality. is the 'not' at the end a restart-game button, or is it a looping (same storyline/not a reset point) button? (i got the safe end and noticed that the restart button is names as such). even if it's unintentional i think it adds to the mysterious events of the game's narrative.
i think having the text more towards the center of the screen could help visually? if there are going to be full-background images, placing the text more 'in' the game might work? i'm also playing this on a computer, so the screen just feels large compared to the text -- there's a way to reformat for different screens in the stylesheet.
overall, i loved this game !! it's confusing in a way that's very fitting for the narrative :)
The storyline of the game is very intriguing but I kept getting the same ending. Are there multiple endings or is there only one way this game ends? I played multiple times selecting different choices but I landed in the same spot. Nonetheless, great game, kept me engaged
I like how the narrative hints towards dream or reality, the cover image goes well with the game, kinda add an annotation where it hints that you have to click the text in order to start the game
I like the welcoming opening image with the large bold title and illustration. Maybe there can be more options in the passage to choose from or explore in the descriptions/settings you have.
When i get to the point where you realized you dropped your keys and your heart starts to sink, i cant access any other selection box, either something is missing, or the passage is too long for scrolling to be disabled.
But other than that intreging story, can already see some dream/psychedelic imagery.